argh
you definitely have talent, but comeon, vary that guitar part once in a while, haha.
the singing was nice, but you seemed like you were lacking confidence and authority. you have a nice voice, just put more power and emotion in it. i really hope to see more music from you soon, hard to find music that actually takes talent on newgrounds.
4/5
<3
haha i know this instrument
i have this on my keyboard too
nice i guess, singing was ehhhhhh
sigh
this is so awfully generic.
please do something different.
i dont care that you edited like 2 parts
it's so stale now.
this is really well done
the person below is an eleven year old idiot, disregard him.
raised your score .7
sorry that people are retarded.
oh god
sup custom
know you from ffr
lmao
this song was trippy and a bit annoying due to the whole depth effect that you completely drug through the dirt and pounded with a stone.
it gave me a headache having the drum loop go from left to right to left to right and so on, then a really annoying background sound,
but that's just me, sorry man.
it was a cool drum loop though and i liked what it couldve sounded like, but i hated the shift of direction and really disliked the sounds that you were using.
3/5,
why..
why are you on newgrounds...?
this is so good man.
<3
i hate
people that rate a song according to genre,
it's so gay.
and man, do whatever you please.
4/5.
uhh
not 8bit
i think it's decent when looking on a minimalist perspective, but it's really lacking kick, i can really hear another instrument in here.
yah see now if i could make the lead and background synth loops appear on one of my other programs, i'd be set. But my compy fails at life. I'll try to fix it Eventually. Someday. =)
I'm logan, i enjoy attempting to make music on my keyboard, sometimes it works, sometimes not so much.
Age 31, Male
Versailles, Kentucky
Joined on 9/14/08
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