Lpauley's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[.HLS. Russia Privjet (Live)]

i actually hate basshunter

but the live effect was quite pimp,
you should remix it more and edit those drum loops, so generic!

but it was a good listen.
4/5

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Disturbia]

noooooooo

this song always gets stuck in my head when Rihanna sings it.

nontheless it was quite fun to listen to it.

criticize & rate back?
thanks mate.

4/5

NeonProject responds:

Haha, I know what you mean, that's probably the reason why this version exists!

Thank you ^^

Okay :3

[hive rhythm of the disc doctor]

IDM?

if this is supposed to be IDM, then it's not too bad, but it was really lacking some umph, ya know?

also quite repetative, but im sure you know that.
is there a possibility of you expanding on this?

7/10
3/5

criticize & rate back?
thanks mate.

zcult responds:

Yeah. I think I'm going to have to completely reorganize this song... Some of the patterns are getting the way of other patterns... A mess really... Maybe I'll cut out some of the repetition.

Good review. Thanks for the intelligent response.

[The Majestic #2]

it's a nice structure.

it's simple and fun to listen to, but I wish it was longer and more complex,

will you be continuing this?
there is a lot of possibilities for this.

Ermundo responds:

I hear you. The thing is, I'm afraid of making this song TO complex.

[These Mistakes are Mine Alone]

Nub stepping his game up.

I've been following your music on FFR and i'm your friend on myspace xD

i love all your work, and cant really find any mistakes in this mistake. :D

I'd love if you could critique my stuff, <3

nubbinownz responds:

I'll take a look :D Thank You!

[Mary (Studio Recording)]

...

he is definitely not trying to seduce Mary, listen to the lyrics.

the music is really good, but the lyrics and how they are sung are both quite sketchy and awkward.

Monkeywithumbs responds:

"he is definitely not trying to seduce Mary, listen to the lyrics."
You are correct, sir! ;)

"the lyrics and how they are sung are both quite sketchy and awkward."
Yes, I agree. First of all, it is a work in progress and lastly, I can't sing :l

[my son camden]

saw a lot of potential

wasnt really fulfilled, but it was still a good listen, nice little melody.

ps. stepmania xD

zomgkerrie responds:

yea after not listening to it for awhile and then hearing it again, i can hear that it does sound a tad empty. i will work on that with my sound. i think that is the hardest thing....omg i <3 stepmania haha. i have 16G worth of songs *hides in shame* thanks for the listen and review!!!