Lpauley's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[loop shit]

chill

this song was chill as crap dude
fun listen, cool loop.

9/10

criticize & rate back?
thanks mate.

[The Majestic #2]

it's a nice structure.

it's simple and fun to listen to, but I wish it was longer and more complex,

will you be continuing this?
there is a lot of possibilities for this.

Ermundo responds:

I hear you. The thing is, I'm afraid of making this song TO complex.

[Pissed Off (wip)]

rough.

love the sound, nice and hard, really fun to listen to listen to with good headphones,

really loved it when the change occurred ~:57, maybe varying the drum loops at about ~1:20-1:43 could make a really cool song.

critique and vote for mine?
thanks mate.

[These Mistakes are Mine Alone]

Nub stepping his game up.

I've been following your music on FFR and i'm your friend on myspace xD

i love all your work, and cant really find any mistakes in this mistake. :D

I'd love if you could critique my stuff, <3

nubbinownz responds:

I'll take a look :D Thank You!

[ParagonX9 - Chaoz Fantasy]

this song actually gets annoying after a while.

i really like it the first time i heard it like, 6 months ago
but now it's just annoying, sorry to say.

classicaly paragon, i just wish it could've stayed soft instead of always turning into something else.

[Mary (Studio Recording)]

...

he is definitely not trying to seduce Mary, listen to the lyrics.

the music is really good, but the lyrics and how they are sung are both quite sketchy and awkward.

Monkeywithumbs responds:

"he is definitely not trying to seduce Mary, listen to the lyrics."
You are correct, sir! ;)

"the lyrics and how they are sung are both quite sketchy and awkward."
Yes, I agree. First of all, it is a work in progress and lastly, I can't sing :l

[Westnyle - My Life Sucks]

nice.

you have a lisp right?
i really think that adds to the song, gives personality.

what do you make your beats with?

[my son camden]

saw a lot of potential

wasnt really fulfilled, but it was still a good listen, nice little melody.

ps. stepmania xD

zomgkerrie responds:

yea after not listening to it for awhile and then hearing it again, i can hear that it does sound a tad empty. i will work on that with my sound. i think that is the hardest thing....omg i <3 stepmania haha. i have 16G worth of songs *hides in shame* thanks for the listen and review!!!

[{I'm Sorry}]

this.

is great.

[Summer bash]

actually

ill just add you to my favorites.

ps, thats HARD to do.