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argh

you definitely have talent, but comeon, vary that guitar part once in a while, haha.

the singing was nice, but you seemed like you were lacking confidence and authority. you have a nice voice, just put more power and emotion in it. i really hope to see more music from you soon, hard to find music that actually takes talent on newgrounds.

4/5

<3

haha i know this instrument

i have this on my keyboard too

nice i guess, singing was ehhhhhh

sigh

this is so awfully generic.
please do something different.

i dont care that you edited like 2 parts
it's so stale now.

this is really well done

the person below is an eleven year old idiot, disregard him.
raised your score .7

sorry that people are retarded.

Kazmo responds:

Thank you very much. :]

Very much appreciated.

oh god

sup custom
know you from ffr
lmao

this song was trippy and a bit annoying due to the whole depth effect that you completely drug through the dirt and pounded with a stone.

it gave me a headache having the drum loop go from left to right to left to right and so on, then a really annoying background sound,

but that's just me, sorry man.
it was a cool drum loop though and i liked what it couldve sounded like, but i hated the shift of direction and really disliked the sounds that you were using.

3/5,

why..

why are you on newgrounds...?

this is so good man.
<3

i hate

people that rate a song according to genre,
it's so gay.

and man, do whatever you please.
4/5.

uhh

not 8bit
i think it's decent when looking on a minimalist perspective, but it's really lacking kick, i can really hear another instrument in here.

Ric-Olzow responds:

yah see now if i could make the lead and background synth loops appear on one of my other programs, i'd be set. But my compy fails at life. I'll try to fix it Eventually. Someday. =)

disaster

i see what you were doing with this, and it was decent,
first off, it's spelled disaster lol,
the start wasn't too bad, but it was basically the exact same notes, with the exact same bass line for about 50 seconds, which gets really old after a while, trying changing the notes around a bit, or creating a new part,
i like how you changed it around at like ~1:20, but it seemed like there were a lot of 'off notes'; ones that just didn't mesh, or go with the song.
the song has a lot of room to work with, but right now, it doesnt really seem to fit the story you were trying to tell, atleast to me.

3/5,

carl565 responds:

lolsosoff notes? oh i get what your trying to say. yeah i tryed spell check and it said mine was right so i used it, i am good at spelling its just i was being retarded i guess. in my new song im changing every sound of the instruments every 4 measures and its getting longer every day, right now its about 2:23 seconds long. you are right, the story i wrote doesnt go with it at all lol

where's sea air

no really
where's sea air

KgZ responds:

i sea wat u did air

I'm logan, i enjoy attempting to make music on my keyboard, sometimes it works, sometimes not so much.

Age 30, Male

Versailles, Kentucky

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